An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry.
Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
应对上面这个题目,考生在主体段有一句是这么写的:
Despite the economic reasons, there is another reason for national reputation.
※ 这句话是主段的第二个分论点,起头介绍第二个原因。
改写如下
Economic reasons aside, there is another reason: to enhance the national reputation.
解析:
※ despite 介词,“虽然,尽管”,表示虽可能有其他障碍,但这件事还是成真了。例:Despite applying for hundreds of jobs, he is still out of work.
※ 分析原因时,这两个原因基本属于并列或递进关系,所以改写成economic reasons aside, “抛开经济原因不提”。
※ reason 常见的搭配有:
* reason for … 某情况发生的理由,如reason for her decision她所做决定的理由
* reason why … 某情况发生的理由,reason why you’re so late你迟到这么久的理由
原句中,国家的名声已经是原因本身了,所以改用冒号解释说明reason。