苏州雅思培训班2016年8月27日雅思写作大作文解析及范文
雅思作文题目
Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
解析
本题问：在城镇空地，该种树还是该建房？可能很多学生会直接回答：当然应该种树！原因是种树可以让环境更好更美，还可以让人们的身体更加健康。这个答案自然是可以的，但若只写种树的优势，恐怕就无法顾及讨论建房的优势了。然而，我们知道，如果一个城镇无法为其居民提供足够的住房，也是很有问题的。因此，从这个意义上，我们可以分别讨论种树的条件和优势，以及建房的条件和优势，然后得出结论：在住房条件已经满足的情况下，应该种树；但若住房不够，城镇空地还是应该建房以满足人们的现实需要。
那么，破解这个题目的关键就在于区分不同的城镇。有些城镇已经有足够多的住房，这些城镇的空地应该植树，而对于那些住房不足的城镇，建房显然应该是选择。在解析8月20日雅思作文真题“慈善机构应该只帮助自己国家的人还是应该帮助其他国家的人”时，唐老师提出，要善于在雅思作文题目中寻找“破题点”，即将题目中的关键词分解成不同情况分别加以讨论。比如，8月20日的雅思作文，关键就是将“慈善机构”进行分类：有着眼于地方问题的慈善机构，也有着眼于全球问题的慈善机构，不同的机构，其基金流向就不同。这样讨论，就显得言之有物，逻辑清楚。
7分范文
Many people suggest that there should be more trees rather than houses in the open areas of cities and towns. While this suggestion is reasonable in many cases, it is not so in others.
For a city or town which has already had sufficient supply of housing, planting trees in the open areas is certainly a good idea. With green trees covering the streets, the city look much more beautiful. That is why I prefer living in southern cities where green trees are everywhere even in winter to living in northern cities. At the same time, more trees make the city air cleaner, because as we all know, trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which is beneficial to the health of the city dwellers. Statistics show that people living in a tree-covered city enjoy much higher life expectancy than those living within the concrete walls of tall buildings.
Yet, it would be stupid to ask people to plant trees in a city or town where they can not find enough houses to live in. Planting trees is undoubtedly more environmentally friendly, but getting a shelter to keep off rain and wind is always the top concern for all people. 30 years ago, in many cities and towns in China, for example, numerous houses were built as the urbanisation attracted a large number of people into the city. People did not focus on planting trees back then, not that they did not understand the importance of a healthy environment, but that they found they should put survival at the top of their agenda.
There is no definite answer, therefore, to the question whether we should plant trees or build houses in the open areas of a city, because the answer is dependent on how developed the city is. In a highly developed city, planting trees is always a better choice, yet in a less developed city, houses are more needed than trees.
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