苏州雅思培训班关于2016年8月20日雅思写作大作文解析及范文2
雅思作文题目
Some people think charity organisations should help people in great need wherever they live. However, others think they should help people in their own country. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
解析
仔细审题，我们会发现题目要求我们讨论的观点是：慈善机构应该帮助所有人，还是仅帮助自己国家的人？这个题目非常有意思，可以从多方面加以讨论，但是相对于一般的教育类话题、环保类话题等，这个话题可能对有些“两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书”的学生会构成不小的挑战。当然，有些同学英语词汇量不够，连charity是什么意思都不明白，那这个作文对他们而言就是简直了！
那么，究竟如何构思这篇作文呢？我们可能会本能地觉得，慈善机构应该帮助本国的人，因为慈善机构的钱主要来自本国，但是，在这个全球化的时代，很多慈善机构的钱难道不是来自世界各地吗？何况，慈善机构的宗旨就是帮助人类克服困难，救助扶持社会中的困难人士，从某种意义上，我们也可以说，在这个全球化时代，帮助其他国家的人本质上也是在帮助自己国家。这样，好像我们又可以认为慈善机构应该帮助世界上所有需要帮助的人（people in need)。如果我们进一步思考，将慈善机构分为“地区性的慈善机构”和“全球性的慈善机构”，那么这个问题就更容易讨论：地区性的慈善机构主要应该帮助本国人（有余力的时候帮助外国人），全球性的慈善机构则应放眼全球，哪里需要就到哪里去。
将题目中的关键词进行细分，然后分别讨论，是雅思写作的重要应对策略之一。比如，就“网络电影能否取代电影院”，我们就可细分，就一般电影而言，网络完全可以取代电影院，但对于那些特别依赖特殊效果的电影而言，网络不可能取代电影院；就年轻一代而言，他们可能更愿意在网上看电影，但就年纪比较大的观众而言，他们宁愿去电影院，等等。大家可以试着用这种“关键词细分法”去破题，在很多情况下都能柳暗花明，解决你无话可说的窘境。
7分范文
Charity organisations are supposed to offer help to people in great need, such as those suffering from incurable diseases, natural disasters and unexpected accidents. Yet one issue is still in debate: to whom should the money of charity organisations go, exclusively to people who live in the same country as the organisations, or to all people regardless of where they live? To my mind, the answer to this question depends largely on the mission of specific charity organisations.
One important reason why some people hold the same-country view is that, as they see it, the charity money comes from the rich people and other donators who live in the same country as those needy people, and naturally the charity organisations should help them rather than people from other countries. This is partly true, especially to the local charity groups whose chief concern is to solve the local problems. Yet for such organisations as Bill Gates Charity Foundation whose money comes from the entire world, it is far from enough only to help Americans, although it is headquartered in the U.S. As a matter of fact, Bill Gates Charity Foundation, along with other “global” charity groups, has extended its help to all people in all countries and regions throughout the world.
Besides, there are charity organisations that address different issues, some of which being daily necessities, others being disease control, environmental protection, to name only a few. Some of these issues are local while others are global in nature. Generally, local charity groups play a more important role in addressing local issues though outside help is also always welcomed, while in face of those global issues like disease control or environmental protection, charity organisations need to travel across territorial borders and offer help to those who live in any part of the world.
To conclude, where the charity money should go is mainly determined by the chief concerns and missions of different charity organisations. An organisation aiming at solving local issues should spend its money helping people who live in the same country, but if an organisation sets its eyes on global issues, it should not confine itself to a single country.
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