苏州雅思培训班关于2016年8月20日雅思大作文-学生无法集中精力学习的原因及解决办法的解析

雅思大作文题目

Many students cannot concentrate their mind on the school work. Why? How to solve the problem?

解析

这是一篇典型的report类作文题目，要求描写现象，分析原因，然后提出解决方案。本题要求分析为什么现在很多孩子们都无法集中精力学习的原因及解决办法。这个话题大家都很熟悉，原因很容易找到，比如，现在孩子们的魂儿被电脑或智能手机勾走了；现在社会竞争压力大，父母和孩子在一起的时间少了，因此无法监督孩子学习；现在成功的道理很多条，读书不是出路了，等等。提出两个主要原因即可，然后针对这两个原因提出自己的解决方案即可。

7分范文

Students ought to spend most of their time on the school work, but nowadays it is not uncommon that students are simply not able to put their heart to study.

There could be two reasons why this happens. First, today the students are surrounded by far more distractions than the students 20 years ago. While students two decades ago had nearly no choice but get themselves shut in their study room and read books, students today have easy and fast access to Internet, on which they can do almost all things. For instance, they can play computer games, watch videos, search for the information they need, and chat with their friends, to mention only a few. So, instead of concentrating on their academic study, they spend a great amount of time surfing the Internet. Another important factor that affects the students' attitude towards their school work is that a good education they receive seems not as important as before. For quite a while, receiving a good education was the only way for young people to get a decent job or earn a high salary. But now, this does not seem so any more. Students find they have many other means to achieve success other than going to college. The students, therefore, are not motivated enough to focus on their school work.

As education of the young is so important to the future of the world, we ought to find ways out of this embarrassing situation. For example, the school and parents should work together to set limits to the time children spend online. Internet is a good great invention, yet obsession with it will certainly reduce the time that should have been put to more serious work. Besides, we should make our young people understand that life is not just about making money, but about having rich and colorful experience. Books, and education in general for that matter, are essential for them to live a better life.
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