Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people’s health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Once shops are forbidden to sell unhealthy food and drink, such as cigarettes and alcohol, which usually render individuals easily addicted to them, people who lack self-discipline to resist the temptation will have no access to those siren calls.
※ 内容维度(TR)
* 本文站不同意。该句子写于“让步段”，即 禁止商店售卖不健康食品会带来何种好处。
※ 词汇维度（LR）
* “render”是动词，意为“使成为；使变得；使处于某种状态”，render sb. adj.，常用于贬义。归类为写作高光词。
* “addicted (to)”是形容词，意为是“对…上瘾”，注意to为介词。归类为写作通用词。
* “self-discipline”这里是名词，意为“自律；自我约束”。归类为写作通用词。
* “resist”是动词，意为“忍住，按捺（拥有某东西或做某事的欲望）”。归类为写作通用词。
* “temptation”是名词，意为“引诱，诱惑”。归类为写作通用词。
* “siren calls”是名词词组，意为“危险的诱惑”，与上文temptation是同义词。归类为写作通用词。
※ 语法和句型维度（GRA）
* 长句先挑主句句型：once引导的条件状语从句，后跟people为主语的主句。
* once的条件状语后，先跟such as作插入，对于unhealthy food and drink进行举例说明，后跟which引导的定语从句，对food and drink进行进一步解释。
* people后跟who引导的限定性定语从句。
