支招小作文(233) I 动态柱 做家务时间变化

苏州编辑 2025-08-04 17:02

The chart below illustrates the average number of hours spent on housework per day by four different groups of people in 1985, 1995, and 2005.

 

 

按照<数值大小>分段:

- Body 1:unemployed women、women with part-time employment【数值较高】

- Body 2:women with full-time employment、men with full-time employment【数值较低】

 

开头段

The bar chart compares the average daily hours devoted to household chores by four groups—unemployed women, women with part-time jobs, women working full-time, and men employed full-time—in three years: 1985, 1995, and 2005.

概述段

Overall, unemployed women consistently devoted the most time to housework across all the given years, while full-time working men spent the least throughout the period. While the time spent on housework remained relatively stable for most groups, minor fluctuations were observed.

思路要点:

- Unemployed women做家务时间一直最·高

- Men with full-time employment做家务时间一直最·低

- 整体数值较为平稳,但有轻微波动

 

Body paragraph 1

It is notable that two groups contributed more to household tasks. Unemployed women spent the most time in domestic tasks during the 20-year period, beginning at 7 hours in 1985. This figure dipped slightly to 6.8 hours in 1995, before rising back to 7 hours by 2005. In comparison, part-time working women devoted 6 hours per day to household chores in all the three years, ranking second in terms of time spent on housework.

思路要点:

unemployed women、women with part-time employment【数值较高】

- 有两组人做家务时间较久

- unemployed women:1985年7hours→小幅度下降到1995年的6.8 hous→2005年小幅度上升回7hours

- women with part-time employment:1985-2005年间数值不变,平稳在6hours

 

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, full-time working adults spent considerably less time on domestic duties. For full-time employed women, the average dropped significantly from 3 hours in 1985 to 2 hours in 1995, followed by a modest rise to 2.5 hours in 2005. Meanwhile, full-time working men saw a gradual increase in the time spent on chores, reaching 1.2 hours in 2005.

思路要点:

women with full-time employment、men with full-time employment【数值较低】

- 全职工作的人做家务时间较少

- women with full-time employment:1985年3hours→显著下降到1995年达到2hours→2005年小幅度上升到2.5hours

- men with full-time employment: 1985到2005年间小幅度上升到1.2hours

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