支招小作文(55) | 【线图1】过去时间内的变化

苏州编辑 2021-08-17 15:02

数据图:【线图】

主要描述【变化】,可能描述比较。

时间完全在【过去】。

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【Introduction】

第·一句话说明图的大意:Shown in the graph are three lines that respectively depict the total number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island, as well as the specific numbers of two particular types of tourists. 第·一句话中注意下划线部分是引起了一个倒装句(主语和系动词位置颠倒的倒装),这种倒装结构可以当成模板套用。The general view of those numbers is that they all had evident overall growth. 第二句话说明图的最宏观最直观的特点。

【Body】

老章决定按照线的起点顺序展开写作。并且最上面的一条线是total number,那这样的顺序就正好也是让作文的主体部分以“总—分”,即“先总人数,再两种具体游客群体”的结构展开。并且,老章决定把这条线拆成三部分来写:Most conspicuously, the growth in the total number, which started at 1 million, continued for five years. 第·一句话的内容覆盖这条线的前五年作为第·一部分。第二句话把后两年作为后两个部分一句话写完:After it was interrupted in 2016 when the number stayed at the previous year’s level (approx. 2.7 million), the growth accelerated, and the number surged to 3.5 million. 如何把两个部分一句话写完?善用after这个表达时间先后顺序的词。这样就可以把两句话合成一句话写了。

第二段写起点排在第二位的线:Some of the visitors went on to the island. 第·一句话用一个简单短小的句子介绍一下要描写的人群。接下来这句话的写法值得注意:Although their number, during the years, had an overall increase from roughly 0.8 million to 1.5 million, it was stagnant for two years in a row, which are 2014 and 2015, and had a slip afterwards. 这句话用了although这个让步,句子的逻辑是“从整体到特殊细节”,即“虽然整体如何,但是特殊要注意的是什么”。这个句子模式和对应的逻辑模式可以套用。

第三段写起点排在第三位的线,并且,这一段的写作方式和上一段是基本上一样的,那么,这样可以在考场上省脑筋省时间:There were also tourists who stayed on the cruise ships. The years witnessed a marked rise in their number to 2 million from merely 0.7 million, despite the initial slight up-and-down during the first two years. 这句话的句子模式和对应的逻辑模式和上面一段的那一句相同,只是用了不一样的让步引导词despite。同时注意:先to xxx再from xxx也是对的,不用担心。It is also notable that the number exceeded that of the visitors going onto the island during the course of growth. 最后最好补充一句描写交点处的超越作为一个重要特征。实在是忘记写了也无妨。

词汇注意:高亮标出的表达程度的形容词、已经带有程度意义的动词和一些特殊动词、表达上升下降的名词。

句法注意:通过使用不同的主语来丰富句子的模式,以及长短句的交错。

【Conclusion】

In general, the numbers grew in disparate ways, and the island’s popularity increased.

结尾段建议有。一句话宏观的方式、粗线条的方式总结主体部分,后半句属于提分点,会写就写,不会写无妨。


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