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作者: 2025-09-23 17:04 来源:苏州编辑
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he map below shows the changes that have taken place at a zoo in Australia between 1960 and now.

主体段分段:一图一段

 

头段

The maps illustrate the layout of a zoo in Australia, comparing its design in 1960 with its current arrangement.

 

概述段

Overall, this zoo has experienced noticeable modifications during the given period, featuring the introduction of transportation and recreational amenities, as well as the relocation and removal of several animal exhibits.

思路要点:

- 变化显著

- 新增休闲场所、交通更便利,部分设施地点改变、部分设施拆除

 

Body paragraph 1

In 1960, a winding pathran through the zoo from north to southdividing the area into several sectionsThe northwestern area housed African animals, while Australian species were kept to the south. On the opposite side of the main path, there was a bird enclosure, adjacent to a seal show that stood at the end of a branch road near the harbor. Below them, a chimpanzee habitat was situated, followed by a gift shop further southThe entire eastern part of the zoo was designated as a picnic area.

思路要点:1960年

- 一条南北走向的步行道将这个动物园分成了不同部分

- 西北African animals,它南边是Australian animals

- 步行道对面是bird,附近有seal show(位于分岔路口末端、邻近harbor)

- 南边有chimpanzee,最南边是gift shop,东边是picnic area

 

Body paragraph 2

Today, a ferry terminal has been introduced to the west of the former harbor, which now has been removed to the northwestern corner. Two new entranceshave been constructed at both ends of the main path. The Australian animal habitat remains unchangedwhile the former African animal section is now dedicated to wild animals. Meanwhile, the seal show has been moved to the previous chimpanzee habitat, and a smaller habitat for African animals has been added to the westHowever, the bird enclosure has been removed. The original gift shop has been expanded into a two-storey building. Moreover, a new cable car system, extending from the northern to the southern part of the zoo, has been built near the picnic area, significantly improving accessibility for visitors.

思路要点:

- path没变,但原来harbor的西边新建了ferry terminal,原来的harbor改址到西北角落

- path南北两端新增entrance

- 原来Australian animals区域不变,但African animals区域被用作wild animals保护区,

- seal show改建在原来chimpanzee区域的位置,它西边新建一个小面积的African animal区

- bird区域被拆除

- gift shop被扩建成两层

- picnic area附近新建南北走向的cable car

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