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支招小作文(62) | 地图1:比较关系的混合视角

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* 非数据图:地图

* 主要描述“比较”,也可以理解为“变化”

* “现在VS将来”,注意时态

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# Introduction

Shown in the two maps are the present floor plan of Southwest Airport and the development plan of it. Overall, the airport after the development will be moderately different. 第·一句划线部分是一个倒装形式,当成套话记住。提醒注意:动词的单复数由后面的内容决定。第二句话陈述图的宏观情况。通常说来,就是说一下区别的程度,或者变化的程度。

# Body

主体部分有三种写法:上帝视角(平面图);访客视角(视线图/线路图);混合视角。

新航道雅思培训小编这里决定用“混合视角”写作。用这个视角写作时注意:用将来去比较于现在(而不要先写现在再写将来),这样可能省字省劲:The most conspicuous difference is the 10 more gates on top of the existing 8 gates, and those additional ports are the extensions of the airport, making the airport larger. Accordingly, the present walkway, which transports the passengers to the gates, will be replaced with a sky train.

写完外部区别后,到下一段去写内部。这样通过份段来引导读者的写作思路是很讨读者喜欢的: The main part of the terminal building will have moderate changes only in its interior. First, both the entrance and the exit will have two doors. Second, departing visitors will see a bag drop area where the check-in zone currently is, and the check-in zone will be moved across the hall and against the east wall. Accordingly, the café will be relocated, and visitors will find it in the southwestern corner and in the immediate vicinity of the entrance. Another addition is the shops in the waiting lounge behind the customs. 注意新航道雅思培训小编已经在这一段刻意覆盖了常规各种可能的句子主语/句子开头。通过丰富句子主语/开头来丰富句子的形式是语法得分的重点。当然,黄色高亮的部分是值得注意和记忆的名词、动词、方位词。

In the hall of arrivals will also be a few more facilities. Arriving visitors passing the customs would look to their left-hand side for a café and an ATM on their way out.By the exit, car rental – another addition for visitors’ convenience – will be available in a small extension. 第·一句划线部分是一个倒装形式:说明方位的介宾短语置于句首时的主系倒装。同样黄色高亮的部分是值得注意和记忆的名词、动词、方位词。

# Conclusion

In light of all the changes, Southwest Airport will have greater capacity and become more functional. 只要开头段有了对于图的总述,其实结尾段可以没有。但是新航道雅思培训小编还是写出来给参考和以后别的作文提示。

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