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2020年10月31日雅思大作文题目
实现生活目标主要是运气使然吗?
Whether or not a person achieves his aims in life is mostly a question of
luck?
实现生活目标主要是运气使然吗?
审题与解析
本次考试的题目也是新题,虽然如此,这个题目是大家比较熟悉的话题,因此写起来应该不缺少素材。
首先,成功有时的确需要运气。【这个比较好论证】
其次,运气不是成功最重要的要素,努力才是。【这个也比较好论证】
结论:实现生活目标,主要靠努力,而不是运气,但是若有运气的眷顾,成功更容易来到。因此努力是成功的发动机,运气顶多可以成为加速器。
高分范文
Many people think that luck plays the most significant role in a successful life, but in my view, to achieve success in life, one needs continuous hard work, though luck does help in some cases.
Luck may assume different forms and help people in various ways. A man luckily born into a wealthy family will stand a better chance of becoming a successful businessman than one with poor family background. A person with a naturally good voice will be more likely to achieve his aim of becoming a great singer than one without.
However,luck alone cannot make a successful life. The most essential element of success is hard work. Therefore, even without rich parents, a man could still become a successful businessman if he works hard enough. Likewise, without a naturally good voice, a man could still become a great singer as long as he keeps on practising. In fact, we have seen many people who have failed to achieve their life's aims even though they appear to be very lucky in the first place. One good example is Zhong Yong in a Chinese story, who is so luckily talented as to be able to compose excellent poems as a seven-year-old child. Then his parents treat him as a money-making machine, showing off his talent around the country, and pretty soon he loses his natural talent and becomes an average child.
My conclusion, then, is that while luck may contribute to our success in life, hard work is what really makes us successful. As is suggested in the old saying "God helps those who help themselves", I believe hard work should become the engineof our life, and luck can at best be the accelerator.
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